Friday, September 10, 2010

Assignment 1

Ayrton Mantha might just seem like a little adalecant boy but when nobody is watching he really has super strength. He can lift an obscene amount of weight. The leaning of Tower of Pisa wasnt always leaning. This is the story of how it became leaning. One day back in the 1800's a small skinny man by the name of Antonio Esposito came up to Ayrton Mantha, and told him he wanted to make a building like no other building before, a building that was leaning. He didn't know that Ayrton had super strength. Ayrton told him to build the building upright and he would take care of the leaning part of the building once it was built. Antonio built the building and told Ayrton that it was done and asked how he was going to make it lean. Ayrton calmly answered, "Well I'm going to push it, obviously." Antonio was very mad, and did'nt believe Ayrton at all so Ayrton walked up to the building. The whole town was watching in disbelief. Ayrton started to push the building as if the building was made out of feathers.The building started to lean. All the villagers were in distraught about what was going on. Everyone was thinking is this really happening? Yes it was! Antonio came running to Ayrton asking how he did that amazing act of strength. Ayrton just replied "I'm the man, that's why." Ayrton left town and is now helping the weak strength people move ridiculously heavy objects all over the world.

1 comment:

  1. Good start, Ayrton. Reasonable detail. Needs proofreading. Focus on diction and creative imagery. Consider some similes and metaphors.

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